looks good.Is it supposed to be over 10 minutes long? Did you use movie maker for this?
This looks really good, do you need annotations on each clip and do the clips have to be in a specific order?
Its well edited isn't it! The clip should be no more than ten minutes long. You need to inculde the different elements to your training. Harley, for golf you'll need to consider using examples of drives, long and short irons, chipping, bunker play and putting for example, then you in competition.
Chloe, you don't have to annotate every clip, so long as you feel the moderator can clearly see whats going on. Use annotations to draw their attention to something (it may be a result/particular skill/change of position etc).
This is really good, should be include the results from our competitive performance when the video footage is being shown?